OK, just done watching, so here's what I think.
The intro was pretty cool, very nicely done, but a bit too long. More deathball, less posing please

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You needed a lot more action based around defence, so more great saves, and good play by the sweeper.
Also, the movie was only 320*240 size. This is just too small. I would consider 640*480 the absolute minimum for a gaming movie. And if the filesize gets doubled, who cares? Once you are downloading over 100Mb, you will want to get it no matter what the size is.
If you want a really decent mirror, try submitting it to badct.de They have a huge repository of great game movies, and really high bandwidth.
As for my mirror :
http://fluffy.ecs.soton.ac.uk/~jdsg102/DeepBlack.zip
Let me know what speeds you get

Please bear in mind that this is liable to go down at any time.
If the student webserver melts, I may be in some trouble
