Oh no, I wrote something

Post by **DavidM** » 31-03-2006 00:08

I wrote a piece of lyrics and music... :s
It's a rather serious song, pointing out the problems in the world, crying for peace etc.
A real message song.

Here you go if you dare:
http://deathball.net/davidm/03messagesong.htm

oh well, nevermind x_X

speedy · Post by **speedy** » 31-03-2006 02:13

your th sounds like ss

Messy · Post by **Messy** » 31-03-2006 12:25

He has been improving on that speedy $\o/$

*g* you said shite

ps: I *think* I like simple songs better, but you wrote a nice song nonetheless \o.

BunnyS · Post by **BunnyS** » 31-03-2006 12:43

Well whatever I say will be bias ^^
I'm guessing by the ":s" face, you're still not completely happy with it but considering it's your own composition...etc you have done well with it and from here on, your next pieces can only get better right ?

Post by **DavidM** » 31-03-2006 12:52

another composition? all my profound ideas about this world are already in these lyrics....there is no more room for anything new

BunnyS · Post by **BunnyS** » 31-03-2006 13:15

Well in that case you can write about Mars or Pluto , I hear it's nice this time of year g*