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Interesting name

<----- Annanagram

Nice to meet you, Derse.
*reach the beach*
Kex? What are you doing there? I don't think you're already strong enough for swimming!

<--- Kex

*startled*
*turns slowly* Don't need to be strong anymore. Bye!

Wikipedia

<--------Derse

Is that your friend?

I will read that later

<----- Annanagram

Yes, she is ... and she's about to do something stupid! *forepaws almost in the water* Can you ... can you help me to get her out of the water?

<--- Kex

*stares at the stranger*
*turns towards the sea and goes further*

<---------Derse

Ok. Whats her name?

<----- Annanagram

Her name is Kex!

This character is mainly to add some comedy to the story but with seriousness too.

<--------Derse

Ok.
Umm Kex....why are you going into the sea?
*the little machine blinks on in her pocket*

MacGuffin the cipher or the plot device?

<--- Kex

*pauses* *doesn't turn around* *low voice* I'm going to swim. And when I can't swim anymore, I'll go and meet Giggle. *starts to cry again*

<----- Annanagram

*whisper to Derse* Giggle is her dead girl friend!

The plot device Her first name is also a plot device

<-----------Derse

Um...I didn't know Giggle but I'm sure she wouldn't want you to do something like that...
*the device blinks and displays a list of choices*

I haven't found Derse in Wikipedia

<--- Kex

*louder* I didn't want her to die but she did. So why should I listen to her?

<----- Annanagram

*watch the machine, quite amazed*

I know I had to make it sound like a name

<-----Derse

I don't think she would have wanted to die either.
*the device beeps loudly in her pocket*

<--- Kex

But I want now -
*slightly distracted by the beeping noise*